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Ok so I'm aware this is a ridiculously specific comment with regard to the amazing sum up of what's going on behind the scenes you provided us with, but i'm way too tired to try and think about how promising all of this is.

Shouldn't Bold's name actually be written in bold?

That's it for me,

Keep creating !
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Astreon152~4Y
Renaming everything for the sake of the wordplay would be a bit extreme, whereas as using a silly wordplay with something already existing seems balanced ?

They are named bold, they are bold, they show it off in letteraly everything they say: even the way they express themselves is bold.

I wouldn't mind seeing other writing styles being altered to match a characters's psyche or mood. Even in comics, when people talk the bubble is linked to them by an arrow, wheras when they dream it's through little clouds.

And as you subtly hint towards it: yes, that totally could also be a way of expressing an accent, or a manner of speach, since i highly doubt Tobias is gonna voice act the whole thing.

It's just like how i suggested that in chapter 1, the kids could shout the name of their attacks in caps, because that's how i picture chuuni kids would act their flashy pretend-to-be-hero moves.
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